New story ideas

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Hi, I am new here and there are some great stories here and I have some ideas for more of them. I think many of you would agree that anticipation is a much needed ingredient any story and should be carried on to the end. One story called “after lunch” I thought was very interesting but a couple of changes could be made like having another barber walk over to the chair when she was facing to the window and place a large advertisement poster in front of the mirror so she could not see anything when he turned her around but the poster and the other barbers. When the barber turned her back he said what shall we do boys stop or keep cutting and every one is chanting shorter. After shorter was no longer an option they turned to Shave her which all the barbers took turns doing as more and more people crowded out front. The other one was a young woman who missed her salon appointment and went into a barber shop with just a single chair with a young barber. She said she just wanted a trim and she had never been in a barber shop before. The young barber soon realized that he could easily control her and started trimming her very long hair several inches at a time. Instead of telling her that she would have no hair when he was finished he should have not said anything and pinned the hair on top up out of the way as he slowly reduced the sides and back down to stubble. When he was done shaving her the customers who were watching came up and start rubbing bald wax into her head taking turns until they were passing the buffing cloth back and forth. She showed up for her appointment a week later and he made sure there was a standing room only full house.

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