Styled for Pleasure

[Isumi Yamamamoto]

I have gotten good responses from my friends and people who have good support for my newest story “Styled for Pleasure“. I want to write in the future like in a few months after I come back to the country since I’ll be traveling again. Can you suggest what I should write and what changes I can make like a plot twist? I think my heroine Audrey needs a haircut as I researched so much about this cut remembering my beautiful ex-girlfriend who sported that haircut. I believe Audrey needs to go back to experiment herself with a new hairdo. Please give feedback on what I should write in my next chapter.

Please do read my story : https://www.hairstorynetwork.com/stories/styled-for-pleasure/

[Peishi Jiao – Hair Teacher]

I must say that “Styled for Pleasure” was an captivating read! The way you portrayed Audrey’s journey, especially her transformation with the haircut, was so vivid and engaging. I love that you’re considering a sequel, and I think it’s a fantastic idea to have Audrey go back to experimenting with her look. It could be intriguing to explore how her new haircut impacts her life and relationships even further.
As for plot twists, I’m all for adding some unexpected twists and turns to keep the story exciting. One idea could be to introduce a romantic subplot between Audrey and Penelope, perhaps leading to a girl’s love route. Their chemistry could develop gradually throughout the story, adding depth and complexity to their characters.
Another intriguing twist could involve Audrey discovering Carlos’s infidelity, leading to her decision to break off their engagement. This could be a pivotal moment for Audrey, forcing her to reevaluate her priorities and ultimately empowering her to embrace her newfound independence.
Overall, I think the possibilities are endless for the sequel, and I’m excited to see where you take Audrey’s story next!

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