Bridget had hair past her knees
Soft and thick as you please
It attracted the fellas
And made her friends jealous
It’s still long though; ain’t I a tease?
A real limerick (Sorry to pile on)
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The sylabic structure is correct but ‘fellas’ and ‘jealous” do not rhyme.
Thanks for your comment. No, they don’t rhyme perfectly but imperfect rhymes generally are accepted within reason. I thought it was within reason.
They do for me
OH, but fellas and jealous do rhyme. However to my understanding, Limericks should contain a place in the first line. Doesn’t matter much, it’s just some fun 😉 Limerics are not to be taken too seriously ;), they’re light-hearted by nature.