WARNING: This contains degrading, bdsm and is X-Rated.
My head was spinning, my whole body ached in pain, my eyes slowly opened trying to adjust around the setting but I had a blindfold around my eyes. There was a scent of sandalwood and dusk surrounding me.
I was standing bare naked, my hands were tied above my head and my legs were spread apart. The cold air froze against my body.
I knew where I was.
The 1st punishment room.
Suddenly, the sound of a door opening was heard. The timid footsteps began walking towards me. “I- I’m sorry-“ I tried speaking but was cut off when I felt a hard body pressed against me, warm hands encircled my waist and something hard pressed against my private area.
“Shut the fuck up.” A deep males voice groaned in my ear.
It was sexy, manly and made me wet.
I knew who it was.
Master Knight.
I couldn’t help but moan at what just happened. My blindfold was ripped off and thrown onto the carpeted floor.
My eyes adjusted to the small light peeping through the lightbulb. My eyes slowly trailed to my master that made me wet.
Master Knight is 35 years old despite his age he is very handsome. He’s 6’4, insanely huge, with a bald head that glistened in the small light bolt and beautiful green eyes that’ll make you fall onto your knees. He’s been my dominant for a year now.
“I- I” I stammered out nervously. A chuckle rumbled around the room, he ran his nose down my cheekbones and neck.
“I’m disappointed in you Mila but that means I get to punish you.” He tilts his head into my ear and whispers “Let’s begin.”
Master begins to undress himself naked. I gulp down my saliva to release some nerves but it was pointless. My fringe was blocking parts of my view but I could still see his figure.
He walks towards a stand and starts doing something but I can’t see what he’s doing as his large back is facing me. I use this time to examine him.
He has a nice round bum, his back muscles shows off, his shoulders tense.
Master stalks back to me and bends down to my ankles and releases them. My legs almost gives out but I held myself. “Get on your knees little one.” He commands, my pussy almost drips. I do as he says, my hands still above my head.
His thick large cock is inches away from my lips. Master brings his cock towards my lips and outlines my lips with his shaft. My brown eyes connects with his forest eyes begging to take his cock. “Suck.” He demands.
I waste no time and take his shaft into my mouth.
His cock reaches to the back of my throat, I feel masters veiny hands gripping my waist length hair into a ponytail and my pushing my head backwards and forwards.
Tears start brimming my eyes.
My tongue circle his round dick like a lollipop. A few tears drops down my face as master starts pulling my hair roughly from its scalp. However, I continue sucking.
He groans loudly making me wetter than ever. Aggressively shoving my head.
I’m sure through the small light you can see the liquid dripping from my pussy and down to my thighs.
I continue sucking until he comes into my mouth. “Swallow.” Master demands once again. I swallow the salty liquid, my mouth dripping with a mix of my saliva and his cum. My fringe sticks to my face due to the sweat.
“Good girl.” Master complements, I blush.
Master Knight is very cold, serious and not very patient which scares me but I like the dominance he has. I like him controlling me.
He lifts me up to my feet and now I’m facing him. I can now clearly see him but I have to tilt my head up due to my 5’3 height.
He looks emotionless but there’s a hint of excitement in his eyes which makes my stomach churn.
“As a punishment for disobeying me last night, I’m going to give you an extreme punishment. This means you will receive a haircut of my choosing. I don’t want to hear any complaints. Do you understand my slut?” Master Knight asks, his tone rough, long fingers grips my chin up.
“Y-yes Master Knight, I shall receive any haircut my master desires.” I stutter out as his fingers trace my smooth pussy lips. I gasp, my head tilts back in satisfaction when his two of his fingers shoves into my soaking cunt.
“Good.” Master continues digging his long fingers into my cunt, thrusting them in. “A-ahh.”
He removes his fingers and unleashes me from my bounds. I’m a little annoyed because he didn’t let me come and I was close.
I stand there weakly waiting for my next instructions. “Put on those heels.” I do as he says. They’re black stilettos with straps. I like the height, they’re 4 inches.
“Follow me Mila.” We walk out the room and I follow closely behind him with my head down. My heels clink against the wooden floor. “Get in.” Master says. I slowly walk in and my chest starts beating really fast, I thought master could hear it.
The room is eerily quiet, the setup is an old barbers station. The whole set up is in wood, a huge mirror, materials placed on the counter and lastly a huge brown barbers chair placed in the middle. The dark black bondage bench placed in the corner.
I gulp down the nerves in me as a flash of the familiar set up from when I was first here.
The first time I was here, was when master first brought me (1 year ago) from the BDSM club and showed me The 2nd Punishment Room. He told me, he only uses The 2nd Punishment Room for extreme punishments.
I’ve never had an extreme punishment until today.
My heart sinks in panic but also aroused.
“Go and sit in the barbers chair.” Master whispers into my ear. I slowly walk towards the chair and place my bum on the cold leather seats. Master stands behind me and examines me.
“M-Master what type of haircut am I going to receive?” I ask timidly looking around the items scattered in front of me. My eyes looks into the mirror to see master.
“Hm, I’m not going to tell you as it’s a punishment. You will see at the end but I’ll give you a clue. Maybe you’ll go bald like me. Completely hairless.” He replies back whispering the last bit into my ears as if it’s a secret.
Tears start to swell up at the word “bald” but I refuse to let them fall. Master Knight pumps up the barbers chair so that my head is level with his chest.
“I want your eyes open while you receive your punishment.” He demands. “Yes master.”
I hear shuffling before master grabs my wrists and handcuffs them behind my back. Then he grabs my ankles and spread my legs open. The air hits my bare pussy making me shiver and wet. As my legs are spread open, the heels digs into the arms rest of the chair.
“Don’t move.” He says coldly. “Yes master.”
I hear more shuffling before an object is placed in between my thighs. The vibration is strong, quick and it makes me clench my pussy.
“While you receive your punishment, the vibrator will be turned onto the highest level. You will not cum. If you do, I’ll give you another extreme punishment. Do you understand my slut?” Masters voice dominate the room, his fingers runs through my locks.
“Y-Yes M-master.” My voice quivers. I don’t think I can handle this.
I know the next punishment is waiting for me.
“Why are you being punished Mila?”
“Because I d-disobeyed your i-instructions.”
“And what we’re my instructions Mila? Are you asking for another punishment?”
“N-No master. To drink r-responsibly and not have a lot of a-alcohol but I did the opposite.”
“Very well then. Let’s get started.” Master smacks the side of my face, my eyes lock into the mirror suddenly the vibrations of the vibrator reaches its highest level.
I moan quietly and try to focus on not coming.
I feel masters muscles graze my shoulder as he reaches for something. My hair is suddenly pulled and sectioned into three. Master ties each section with a hair tie gently. “I’ve always wanted to do this with you and the time has finally come.” His fingers lift up a section of my hair and SNIP.
The scissors slowly starts chopping off my black waist length hair.
SNIP SNIP
At each cut, my pussy wants to release but I hold myself. My legs start to shake. Master grabs my head up and pushes my head down to my chest and continues snipping pieces of my hair wherever he can.
“Don’t come my little whore.” He commands. My mouth spills uncontrollable moans. “A-ahh-“.
My hair is now cut to jaw length. Some parts are short some are long.
“Now for the fun part, where shall we start? The fringe or the nape? Let’s start with the nape.” He says darkly as he pulls at both pieces.
The sudden sound of the clippers are heard, the vibrator and clippers makes me want to cum hard. Master tilts my head and my chin touches my chest. I watch myself in the mirror, the clippers are placed at my nape and suddenly is pulled forward.
*buzzz*
“A-Ahh-“ The buzzing noises made me violently come. I couldn’t handle it anymore. Moans left my mouth and all I could think about was my second punishment.
*buzzz* *buzzz*
“Tsk Tsk. I told you not to come slut.” He said using the clippers running them around the back of my head till they reach the crown of my head.
The buzzing noises stopped, masters hand rubbed the shaved area. I wasn’t hairless though. From the mirror, I could tell he was amused and excited. The vibrator was never turned off, it continued at its highest level.
“Tilt your head back slut.” My head rested against the head rest and master wetted my brows with water.
“I’m shaving off your brows as a punishment for coming when I told you not to.”
“M-master please n-not my brows!” I cried but that didn’t get me nowhere. He slapped me across the face and told me to shut the fuck up.
“Eyes open slut.” I opened my eyes and could see Master Knight above me, a straight razor hovering my face. The razor was placed on right eye brow and slowly scraped away. The same was done on the left.
He pulled the remaining hair on my head and continued my punishment. A loud gasp left my mouth when I looked in the mirror and saw no brows.
Master pushed my head to my chest again and brought the clippers to the middle of head. The clippers were loud, making me want to come again but I held myself back. He made more passes with the clippers around me the whole of my head. Tilting it if he needed to.
“Look at your head, I wish I would’ve shaved you sooner slut.” Master said amused and excited. I looked in the mirror and I came once again.
I wanted to cry in humiliation.
My entire head was shaved (not completely hairless, there was still a stubble around my entire head) but there was still a strip of hair in a U-shape.
“This is called a horseshoe flattop.” The feeling of master rubbing my stubble made me moan as tears were falling from my eyes. “Might as well make you bald for now and once your hair grows we’ll do the horseshoe flattop.”
“Head down slut.” Master turned the clippers on and shaved the rest of my hair. He made multiple passes around the head. Folded my ears to get every single piece.
“You look sexy bald my little slut.” Master claimed. I look in the mirror and I didn’t feel sexy.
I felt like his hairless whore.
“Now for the fun bit.” Cold foam was smacked onto my bald head, his fingers massaged the shaving foam all around.
“Ahhh—“ the vibrator was still on and I’ve came four times already. My pussy is in despair and desperate for something else.
“Stay still slut, I don’t want to prick that pretty little head of yours.”
The straight razor was dipped in water and master pressed his thumb into my temple and shaved the foam off. The blade slowly dragged against my scalp. He continued doing that while I was wetter than ever.
Master would fold my ears while gently removing my black hair with the razor.
He took his sweet time, ensuring not to nick me. Whilst I endorsed the punishment and made it as pleasurable it can be. At first I was crying but now I want it to happen all over again. I want this humiliation again.
Master Knight grabbed a clean towel and wiped the excess shaving cream and that’s when I knew he was done. Master placed his hand on my bald head and rubbed it rough against the skin.
“Fuck you’re so fucking smooth and soft.” He pulled out his cock and started stroking it while rubbing my head.
“Ahhh M-Master-“ By him just touching my head and the vibrations down below made come uncontrollably.
“My hairless slut. Get prepared for next shave. This time I won’t be nice bald whore.” He said vigorously rubbing my bald, smooth head.
I was ready for whatever was in store for me.
A/N:
Hello, Emmina here! Hope you enjoyed Master Knight’s and Mila’s story. I was so excited while writing this and aroused.
Do let me know if you’d like a part 2 on them!
Please remember to vote as it motivates me to write more stories.
Until Next Time x
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