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The Rat

By HabbidBobo

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Adrianna, a med student from New Hampshire, is a gorgeous greek girl 5.7, olive skinned and fit, she is 22 and recently stuck in french prison after being busted with her boyfriend for possessing weed and cocaine. A part of the weed was hers but she didn’t know about the coke. She is sentenced to an unusually harsh 8 years in French prison for it. She is a stunning and shellshocked woman entering prison, who is a beautiful chestnut blonde with amazing hair and statuesque roman nose, with slightly large ears and eyes that make her stand out in any crowd, She is overwhelmed by the horror of her situation, she was on her way to becoming a doctor and now she was trapped in a horrible prison where she speaks a fraction of the language, she knows she has to stay to herself, maybe make a few friends for safety and sanity and have good behaviour. However, she knows that even if she gets early release or extradition, this will be on her personal record forever and no hospital will ever hire her. Colin, her boyfriend has ruined her life and she cannot see him or do anything about it, he was imprisoned 132 miles north of her for only 5 years 7 months in a lower security prison. After She is offered a deal by the cops to infiltrate a violent female gang that is dominant in the prison, the offer her an early release and expunged record if she can get vital information reagrding the gangs leader, a terrifying and ferally regal beast of a woman named Camille Fortin who ran her gang inside and out of prison.

Decided, Adrianna punches the cop that she is speaking to her, making sure camille sees her, out of my face pig she yells. Camiile regards her carefully, but strikingly like a posed jaguar rather than a woman. The next afternoon at recess camille and two of her enforcers approach Adrianna, all of them imposing, muscular and tattooed women with alternative looks (elaborate) Frightened and anxious, knowing this is her moment Adrianna stands straight and looks at the older woman. “I saw u sock that pig yesterday, I like ur spunk girl.” Adrianna nods back, growling,” bastard was trying to feel me up, telling me he would help me out.” Camille laughed and spat in disgust. (time gap as Adrianna infiltrates gang- add more) – Adrianna had been working to get in with camille fortin for weeks and finally felt the woman was starting to accept her, after one day where Adrianna talked back when one of the goons disrespected her Camille pulled her aside and told her she would be accepted into the gang formally. She shuddered in excitement for her possible release as well as terror for what that might mean. – The next night she snuck out to see camille’s crew late, and her head was suddenly covered and she was hit. She was transported and brought before camille and her inner circle. They stripped and oggled her, laughing and mocking before she was told to bring a woman to completion in front of everyone. She reluctantly agreed and fully of shame ate a woman out to jeers and applause. Camille tells her she is now a member save for one last thing, they pull her down to the ground and pull out a wire brand, heated to a terrifying glow by a hot plate. She screams but they hold her tight and brand the center of her chest, and hold it for an agonizing eternity. She shaked in horror and pain and the gang congratulates her emotionally, the fear and comfort form a strange and intimate bond.

After she has recovered fully camille tells her that she is one of them now, and she herself has taken a liking to her and will serve at her side. However, she needs to start to look the part now and will half to make some changes to her look. “Tattoos or hair, definitley need to put on some muscle as well”, Camille mused to Adrianna’s silent horror. She had already been branded and humilated and now her “look” was being altered, what more would this take, she still had nothing for the police. Adrianna found herself sitting rigidly in camilles cell, with 3 of camilles favorites, all tattooed and often butch and vascular. Camille decided that Adrianna would begin with a set of tattoos across her stomach and lower back shaped like chains and roses, circling her brand shaped and covering her once pristine torso. She bit back a sob, but to her dismay camille was just beginning. As the weeks and months passed Camille consistently leveraged her power to suggest changes to help Adrianna fit in, these included a rigorous lifting routine and an insanely dense diet of disgusting anf fattening prison food to help strengthen Adrianna up, thankfully it wasnt as much as others, as camille wanted her to maintain her young and beautiful form. Adrianna also ended up with several more tattoos, which she hated and Camille kept eyeing her hair strangely.

-she ended up unwilling accepting shaving her head partially, exposing her features unpleasantly, she has shaved sides which are tattooed and worse – she has found more and more info but none is the the crucial info the police need. Camille has taken her as her personal pet, and they now share a cell. She constantly exerts further dominance and takes pleasure toying with her lovely pet. Adrianna is still beautiful but the terrible enviroment of the past year have aged her with stress and she has gained a significant about of muscle and and a slight layering of fat around her powerful body she is tattooed elaborately but ornately wrapping from her torso to lower neck and around the sides of her scalp, which is shaven smooth on the sides every morning by Camille to expose careful script and stars. her large ears stood out on her bald sides, and her nose more prominent but she appeared an eagle. And her powerful chestnut main tumbled over her back. She is a magnificent sight, if not the young and lovely med student she had been. Adrianna was intimidating and strong tattooed and muscular. She hated it, but could only move forward, and she knew she almost there, she would be released and go home years early, with her record expunged. she could cover her tattoos and grow out her hair, finally recovering her old life, if deeply altered by her experience. However Camille caught her speaking to the police and suprised her one night, surrounding her with members. She was terrified and camille confiremed her worst fears, she had been outed, they beat her with anger. She thought she would die but camille stopped them, declaring that if she was a rat, they would make her into a true rat, as an example to all others. They began by shaviing the top of her head as she wept. She knew she must appear hideous and would live at camilles behest but with her favour gone, and her hopes of release crushed. Camille cruelly left the back of her hair, binding it into a braid and calling it her rat tail. she would pull Adrianna around by it like a horrible leash. her eyebrows and lashes were plucked, and horrible degrading tattooes layed out abross her body, hands, and face, her future career pulverized. Camille kept her around as a toy and example of what happend to rats, the girl who used te be Adrianna reduced to a fattened, and frightened bald rat, covered in tattoos of gore and slurs, and pulled around on her knees by the 4 foot long oily tail erupting from the back of her head, where it stood out starkly from her pale scalp, the only untouched part of body, which gleamed red with oil and cuts from where camille roughly shaved it every morning. Her face was delicately tattooed over with the wrinkled grey features of a prison rodent, her regal aquiline nose made into a mockery with a brightly colored pick tip. All but her two front top and bottom teeth had been removed and all hope of release and a future had been crushed by the unrelenting cruelty of her capture. She was a freakshow, ruined and erased. Her thoughts were interrupted by the harsh pull of the her long and filthy head tail, as her master dragged her from her spot on the floor. The Rat would crawl behind her forbidden from speaking, and freshly humiliated every day. Slapped and mocked by every prisoner the once beautiful and promising woman is recessed to an inhuman existence.

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