Where Discipline Lived Part 2

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Sana stumbled away from the lounge, her sobs quiet but uncontrollable, each step sending fresh waves of fire across her caned bottom. The welts throbbed under her skirt, a constant reminder of her failures. She wiped her face with the back of her hand, trying to steady her breathing as she headed to the kitchen. The rollers pulled tightly at her scalp, making her head feel strange and exposed, while the corset squeezed her ribs, forcing her to stand unnaturally straight even through the pain.

She had work to do. The lounge needed to be dusted again—Mrs. Whitmore would check every corner. The tea set had to be prepared: fine china cups, saucers, a pot of hot water ready for brewing, small plates for biscuits. Sana moved carefully, arranging everything on a silver tray, her hands still shaking. She swept the floor twice to be sure, fluffed the cushions until they were perfect, and straightened the curtains. Every task felt endless, her mind racing with fear of another mistake. The clock on the wall ticked closer to five.

At exactly five o’clock, the doorbell rang—sharp and clear.

Sana froze for a second, then hurried to answer it, smoothing her apron with trembling fingers.

Three women stood on the doorstep, all around Mrs. Whitmore’s age, dressed in neat blouses and skirts, carrying small handbags. They looked polished, stern, like a group of judges arriving for inspection. The first, a tall woman with sharp features and pinned-up gray hair, nodded curtly. “We’re here for Eleanor.”

Sana stepped aside quickly. “Please come in,” she said softly, eyes lowered.

The women entered without another glance at her, chatting among themselves as they walked to the lounge. “Eleanor always keeps such a tidy home,” one said. “Unlike some people we know.”

Sana closed the door and followed at a distance, announcing in a small voice, “Mrs. Whitmore, your friends have arrived.”

Mrs. Whitmore rose from her chair with a warm smile—much like the one she had given Clara earlier. “Ladies, welcome. Margaret, Helen, Dorothy—it’s good to see you.”

They exchanged light hugs and settled into the sofas, the room filling with their easy conversation about neighborhood gossip and recent events.

Sana stood in the corner as she had been taught, hands folded in front, waiting for instructions. Her bottom still burned, and the rollers made her feel ridiculous, like a doll on display.

Mrs. Whitmore glanced her way. “Girl, bring the tea. And the biscuits. Properly.”

Sana nodded and hurried to the kitchen, assembling the tray with care: teapot steaming, cups arranged evenly, a plate of plain biscuits in the center. She covered it all with a light cloth napkin, just as she had learned the night before. Carrying it back, she served each woman silently, pouring tea without spilling a drop, placing biscuits on their plates.

As she worked, the women watched her openly.

“Who’s this one, Eleanor?” asked Margaret, the tall one, sipping her tea. “New help? She looks a bit… unkempt.”

Mrs. Whitmore set her cup down. “Not help, exactly. The neighbor’s daughter. Staying with me for the month while her mother’s away. I’m teaching her some manners and discipline.”

Helen, a shorter woman with round glasses, chuckled softly. “Teaching, hm? With that uniform and those rollers? Looks like she’s already learning the hard way.”

Dorothy leaned forward, eyeing Sana’s hair. “The rollers are a nice touch. Keeps that wild mane out of the way. But honestly, Eleanor, it’s still too much. She looks like she belongs in a barn with all that hair.”

Sana’s face burned hotter. She finished serving and retreated to the corner, but Mrs. Whitmore snapped her fingers.

“Stand straighter. And don’t fidget.”

The women continued talking, ignoring Sana except for occasional commands, such as “More tea here” or “Clear this plate.” Each time, Sana obeyed quickly, her movements precise but her mind swirling with shame. They discussed her as if she weren’t there—commenting on her posture, her slow pace, even the way her uniform fit.

The afternoon passed in quiet conversation, the women sipping their tea and sharing stories. Sana remained in her corner, silent and still, her scalp aching from the rollers and her body tense from the earlier pain. Finally, as the clock neared six, the friends began to gather their things.

“This was lovely, Eleanor,” Margaret said, standing. “We must do it again soon.”

Mrs. Whitmore walked them to the door, exchanging goodbyes with genuine warmth. As the door closed behind them, the house fell silent once more.

Mrs. Whitmore turned back to the lounge, her expression shifting to its usual stern calm. She looked at Sana. “It’s almost time for dinner. Go to the kitchen and prepare it. Simple meal: boiled chicken, steamed vegetables, and rice. No spices. No extras. Set the table for one.”

Sana nodded quickly and hurried away, grateful for the task to distract her from the lingering humiliation. She cooked carefully, measuring each ingredient, stirring the pot with focus. The steam rose warmly, but her hands still trembled slightly from the day’s events.

When dinner was ready, she set the table perfectly and called softly, “Mrs. Whitmore, dinner is served.”

Mrs. Whitmore entered and sat at the head of the table. Instead of dismissing Sana, she pointed to the spot directly in front of her. “Stand here. Hands at your sides.”

Sana obeyed, standing straight under the tight corset, eyes lowered.

Mrs. Whitmore began eating slowly, her fork moving with precision. After a few bites, she looked up. “Have you understood how things work here? You are not a neighbor staying for convenience. You are here as a maid. Nothing more. You follow orders. You obey without question. And you know what will happen if you don’t—corrections will be swift and firm.”

Sana swallowed hard, her voice coming out scared, polite, and respectful. “Yes, Mrs. Whitmore. But… why are you doing this to me? I didn’t do anything wrong before coming here.”

Mrs. Whitmore set her fork down, her tone commanding and calm as always. “Because your mother asked me to guide you. And guidance means structure. Discipline. You were spoiled at home—lazy, careless, without proper manners. Here, you learn to be useful.”

Sana chose her words carefully, keeping her voice soft. “But it’s so strict. The uniform, the rollers, the rules… I feel like I’m not myself anymore.”

“You are exactly what you need to be,” Mrs. Whitmore replied evenly. “A girl under supervision. Questioning only shows you haven’t learned yet.”

Sana hesitated, then whispered, “I just want to know if it will always be like this. For the whole month?”

Mrs. Whitmore’s eyes narrowed slightly, irritation creeping into her calm voice. “Enough. Maids should only know one word: yes. No more questions. No more talking back.”

Sana fell silent immediately, nodding.

Mrs. Whitmore finished her meal in quiet, then pushed her plate aside. “You may eat your dinner in the kitchen. Whatever is left. Then wash all the dishes, dry them, and put them away properly. After that, bring me a warm glass of milk.”

Sana cleared the table without a word, ate her small portion standing at the kitchen counter—cold now, but she didn’t complain. She scrubbed the dishes until they shone, dried them carefully, and placed each one back in its exact spot.

Then she warmed the milk, placed it on a tray with a cover, and carried it upstairs. She knocked softly on Mrs. Whitmore’s door.

“Come.”

Sana entered, set the tray down beside the chair, and turned to leave.

“Have I dismissed you?” Mrs. Whitmore’s voice stopped her cold.

Sana spun back, face paling. “I’m sorry, Mrs. Whitmore.”

“Stand there.”

Sana waited, hands folded.

Mrs. Whitmore sipped the milk slowly, then spoke shortly. “I hope you have learned how things work around here. What should be done, and how. As for the work, a proper timetable will be provided tomorrow so you would be aware how much time would one task need. And also tomorrow new rules and regulations will be provided which you will follow and obey.”

Sana woke up before the bell could ring, her body aching from the previous day’s punishments and the thin mattress. The basement room was still stuffy and dark, but she forced herself to sit up quickly. She smoothed the sheets and made the bed neatly, tucking in every corner just right, afraid of leaving even a wrinkle behind. Then she opened the small cupboard to change into her uniform.

Her eyes fell on the lower drawer, where the undergarments were stored—old, used pairs from previous maids. Sana’s stomach turned. They were plain white cotton, but faded and worn, some with faint stains that no amount of washing could fully remove. She felt a wave of disgust and deep embarrassment rise in her chest, her face growing hot. These weren’t hers; they belonged to strangers, and the thought of putting them on made her skin crawl. She searched through the pile, hoping for the least worn and cleanest pair, her fingers hesitating over each one. But the memory of the cane’s burning strokes flashed in her mind—the pain, the shame, the promise of worse if she disobeyed. With a quiet whimper, she picked a pair that looked the most decent and slipped them on under her uniform. The fabric felt foreign and uncomfortable against her skin, a constant reminder of her lowered status.

She buttoned the black maid dress with its white collar and cuffs, tied the bib apron neatly, and adjusted the tight corset over her blouse to force her posture straight. Then she sat on the edge of the bed and began rolling her hair. Using the comb and pins from the cupboard, she sectioned it carefully, twisting each part tightly onto the large blue rollers and pinning them high above her head, just as Clara had shown her. She checked in the small mirror she had found in the drawer, making sure no strand was left free—everything neat, controlled, out of the way. Her scalp pulled uncomfortably, but she ignored it.

Once ready, Sana climbed the stairs quietly and went to the kitchen. She prepared breakfast exactly as instructed: two boiled eggs, one slice of whole-grain toast with butter, fresh cucumber slices, and black tea. She set the table perfectly, aligning every utensil, folding the napkin just so. In just two days, she had learned how punctual Mrs. Whitmore was—how even the slightest delay or mistake could trigger her anger immediately. Sana’s hands shook a little as she worked, but she finished on time.

Exactly at six-thirty, the sound of measured footsteps came down the stairs. Mrs. Whitmore entered the dining room, her silver hair in its tight bun, her gray dress neat and buttoned. She sat without a word, back straight as always.

Sana quickly served the food, placing each item carefully before her, then stepped back to her position against the wall—hands folded in front, eyes lowered, standing silent and still.

Mrs. Whitmore began eating in complete silence, her movements slow and deliberate. The only sounds were the soft clink of her fork and the ticking of the clock. Sana’s heart pounded in her chest, her mind racing with worry. What new challenges awaited her today? Mrs. Whitmore’s words from last night echoed in her head—a timetable, new rules, regulations. In two short days, her life had turned into a cycle of fear and obedience, and she dreaded what was coming next.

When Mrs. Whitmore finished, she folded her napkin neatly and placed it beside her plate. She looked up at Sana. “After you have your breakfast, come see me in the lounge.”

“Yes, Mrs. Whitmore,” Sana whispered.

She ate quickly in the kitchen—leftover scraps from the preparation, cold and plain—then washed her dish and hurried to the lounge.

Mrs. Whitmore was seated in her armchair, a sheet of paper in her hand. She gestured for Sana to stand in front of her.

“Here is your schedule,” Mrs. Whitmore began, her voice calm and commanding. “You will follow it exactly, from five in the morning until nine at night. No breaks except what is listed. Wake at five, make your bed, dress properly, roll your hair. By five-thirty, clean the basement room spotless. Six o’clock, prepare breakfast. Serve at six-thirty. After I eat, you clean the kitchen until seven-fifteen. Then sweep and mop the ground floor until eight. Dust the shelves and furniture until nine. Laundry on even days from nine to ten. Garden work from ten to eleven—water plants, trim edges. Lunch preparation at eleven, serve at noon. Clean up until one. Afternoon tasks: iron clothes from one to two, organize storage from two to three. If guests arrive—like Clara or others—you stop everything and serve them quietly, standing in the corner until needed. My friends come Tuesdays and Thursdays from five to six, so prepare tea and stand ready. Evenings: dinner prep at six, serve at seven. Clean until eight. Bring my milk at eight-thirty. Bed at nine, lights out. No idle time. You will always be busy, one task after another. This is designed to keep you useful and disciplined.”

Sana nodded, trying to memorize it all, her mind already spinning from the endless list.

Mrs. Whitmore leaned forward slightly, her eyes sharp. “Have you understood this, girl? Or is your lazy mind too slow to remember such a simple routine? A twenty-one-year-old should be able to handle basic work without forgetting, but from what I’ve seen, you’re forgetful and sloppy. Will you remember, or do I need to write it on your hand like a child?”

Sana’s cheeks burned red, shame twisting in her gut. “Yes, Mrs. Whitmore. I understand. I will remember.”

“Good,” Mrs. Whitmore said, though her tone held no praise. “Now, the rules. They are more formal now, more strict. You do not speak unless spoken to. You address me only as ‘Mrs. Whitmore’ or ‘ma’am.’ No eye contact unless I say. Walk with your head down, back straight—no slouching, thanks to the corset. Meals: you eat only after I do, in the kitchen, standing. No sitting like an equal. Bathroom use: ask permission every time, and only when your tasks allow. No touching your hair rollers during the day. Bed made perfectly every morning. Uniform spotless—if I see a wrinkle, you iron it again. Guests: announce them immediately, stand in the corner, serve without being asked twice. No complaining, no questions, no excuses. These rules are to humble you, to strip away your spoiled ways. If you break any—even by mistake—you know what will happen. The cane, the spoon, or worse, in front of whoever is here. No mercy for errors.”

Sana stood there, scared and trembling slightly, her face beet red from the wave of humiliation. The words sank in like heavy stones, making her mind fog with fear and shame. She could barely think straight, the threats blurring everything else.

But Mrs. Whitmore wasn’t done. She continued in her steady tone. “Now, regulations. For dressing: undergarments must be worn every day—no exceptions, or the punishment doubles. Uniform checked by me each morning after you dress. Hair rolled tight, no loose ends. For addressing others: me as ‘ma’am’ or ‘Mrs. Whitmore.’ Guests by age, gender, marital status—’Miss’ for young unmarried women like Clara, ‘Mrs.’ for married like my friends, ‘Sir’ for men. Ask permission before speaking to them. If they’re older, add ‘with respect’ at the end of sentences. No using first names unless told. These keep you in your place, remind you you’re here to serve, not to be familiar.”

Each new regulation felt like another weight pressing down on Sana’s shoulders, making them slump despite the corset. She stood there, overwhelmed, the fog in her mind thickening, wondering how she could keep up without breaking. Mrs. Whitmore paused for a moment, her sharp eyes studying Sana’s flushed face and trembling stance. She set the paper down on the small table beside her chair, folding her hands neatly in her lap.

“I see from your expression that you’re overwhelmed,” she said calmly, though there was a hint of satisfaction in her tone. “But these are necessary. However, upon reflection, a few more details are needed to ensure complete control and proper behavior. Listen carefully.”

Sana nodded faintly, her mind still foggy, but she forced herself to focus.

“Additional rules: You will curtsy deeply whenever you enter or leave a room in my presence—knees bent, head bowed, holding the position until I acknowledge you. Failure means extra chores. For speech: you will refer to yourself only as ‘this girl’ or ‘the maid,’ never ‘I’ or ‘me.’ For example, ‘This girl is sorry, ma’am.’ It will remind you of your place. Eye contact: forbidden unless I command it; keep your gaze on the floor at all times, showing respect. Cleanliness inspections: every morning after dressing, you will present yourself to me for review—uniform, undergarments, hair, posture. If anything is amiss, correction follows immediately. And for the rollers, you must ask permission each night to remove them. In the morning, I will inspect how you’ve rolled them before you begin tasks. No privacy in that, either.”

Mrs. Whitmore leaned back slightly. “These additions make the regulations complete. Now, repeat them back to me to prove you’ve listened.”

Mrs. Whitmore finished speaking and stayed calmly seated in her armchair, her sharp eyes fixed on Sana. Sana stood there, her mind swirling like a storm, trying desperately to hold onto every word—the schedule times, the rules about speaking and curtsying, the regulations for addressing people, the inspections, the way she had to refer to herself as “this girl” or “the maid.” It all blurred together, making her head hurt even more under the tight rollers.

A small, teasing smile tugged at the corner of Mrs. Whitmore’s lips, but her voice came out calm, almost playful, yet laced with sharp insults. “It looks like you’re still trying to remember all these simple things, girl. I thought you might be slow, but this is dumber than I expected. A twenty-one-year-old who can’t keep a basic list in her head? Pathetic. Maybe your brain is as tangled as that hair used to be.”

Sana’s face burned deeper red, the shame twisting in her stomach like a knot. She opened her mouth to respond, but Mrs. Whitmore’s tone shifted suddenly to a sharp command.

“Stand straight. Arms stretched wide to your sides. Now turn slowly until I say stop.”

Sana obeyed instantly, snapping her posture upright despite the corset’s squeeze. She extended her arms out like wings, feeling exposed and silly, and began turning in a slow circle. Mrs. Whitmore’s eyes scanned her uniform from every angle—the black dress, the white collar and cuffs, the bib apron tied neatly. Then her gaze moved up to the rollers, tugging lightly on a few to check their tightness. Sana kept turning, her cheeks flaming, until Mrs. Whitmore nodded once.

“Stop.”

Sana halted, arms still out, breathing shallow.

Mrs. Whitmore snapped her fingers, her voice calm but commanding. “Remove the bib apron. Open your blouse buttons. I need to be sure you’re wearing undergarments today—or are you still acting like a shameless whore?”

Sana’s eyes went wide, her face already a deep crimson from the earlier teasing. “Please, Mrs. Whitmore,” she pleaded softly, voice trembling. “Don’t make me do this. It’s… it’s embarrassing.”

Mrs. Whitmore’s expression didn’t change. “Hesitating? That’s another mark against you, you lazy fool. Do it now, or I’ll spank you right here before the day even starts. And trust me, it will be harder than yesterday’s little reminder.”

The threat hung in the air, and Sana’s hands shook as she untied the bib apron, folding it neatly and setting it aside. Then, with slow, reluctant fingers, she unbuttoned her blouse just enough to reveal the top of the faded white undergarments beneath. The embarrassment flooded her like a wave, making her want to disappear into the floor.

Mrs. Whitmore leaned forward slightly, inspecting with a quick glance. “Acceptable. For now. Button up and start your duties.”

Sana quickly fixed her blouse and apron, her face still glowing red, and hurried off to begin the schedule. The day felt endless and more tiring than before—the new timetable left no room to breathe. She cleaned the basement room spotless, swept and mopped the ground floor until her arms ached, dusted every shelf and piece of furniture with careful wipes, making sure not a speck remained. The corset dug in with every bend, the rollers pulled at her scalp, and the worn undergarments chafed uncomfortably, a nonstop reminder of her humiliation. She moved from task to task without stopping, sweat building under the stuffy uniform, her mind repeating the rules over and over to avoid mistakes.

Just before eleven, as she finished the garden work—watering plants and trimming edges with sore hands—Mrs. Whitmore called from the doorway. “Prepare lunch for two today. Clara joins me every Wednesday. Remember that.”

Sana nodded quickly, adding the detail to her mental list, and rushed to the kitchen. She boiled vegetables, grilled plain fish, and set out fresh bread—simple, no extras. By noon, the doorbell rang. Sana announced it properly, and Clara swept in with her usual confident stride, hugging Mrs. Whitmore warmly before they sat at the table.

Sana served them silently, refilling glasses and plates as needed, standing against the wall with eyes lowered. Clara and Mrs. Whitmore chatted easily about the day, laughing at small stories, but just as the meal wound down, Mrs. Whitmore shifted the topic.

“You know, Clara, my friends yesterday suggested something about her hair,” Mrs. Whitmore said, nodding toward Sana without looking at her. “They think it should be cut shorter. Less time-consuming, easier to manage for someone like her.”

Clara nodded, sipping her water. “I was thinking the same, Grandma. Those big rollers look so weird—like she’s getting ready for a party, not doing actual work. It’s ridiculous. Shorter would be better. Practical.”

 

They spoke as if Sana weren’t standing right there, her opinions meaningless. Sana’s heart raced, her face flushing again, but she stayed silent. Before they could decide more, lunch ended. Mrs. Whitmore waved a hand. “Clean up, girl. Then bring two cups of green tea with lemon to the lounge.”

Sana obeyed, scrubbing the table, washing dishes until they sparkled, and putting everything away perfectly. She prepared the tea carefully—hot water, green bags, slices of lemon on the side—and carried the tray to the lounge.

As she served them, placing the cups gently, Clara looked up with a casual glance. “Girl, bring these things: a plain cloth for a cape, a pair of scissors, a water spray bottle, a comb, a wooden hair brush, and the smaller size rollers from the storage—the ones half as big as those on your head now.”

Sana gulped, her throat dry. She understood immediately—they had decided to cut her hair. Fear and sadness twisted inside her, but she just whispered, “Yes, Miss Clara,” and hurried to gather the items. She placed them in a neat pile on the small table near Clara, then started walking back to her corner position, hands folded, eyes down.

Clara checked the items quietly, then called out in an arrogant, commanding tone. “Girl! Come here and kneel in front of me. Back toward me.”

Sana hesitated, fear bubbling up. This girl, younger than her, ordering her around like this—and about to cut her precious hair? It was too much. Her face already red with building embarrassment, Sana burst out. “No! I won’t do it! You can’t just cut my hair however you want! It’s mine! Stop treating me like this!”

She shouted, turning from Mrs. Whitmore to Clara, words tumbling out in anger and desperation. But she didn’t notice the silent eye signals passing between them—a quick nod from Mrs. Whitmore to Clara.

Just as Sana paused for breath, Clara lunged forward, grabbing Sana’s ear and twisting hard. Sana screamed in pain, the sharp sting bringing fresh tears. Before she could pull away, Clara yanked her forward a few steps and dragged her over her lap, flipping up the skirt in one swift move.

Sana struggled, kicking and twisting. “Let me go! Stop!”

Clara’s grip was iron-strong, holding her down easily. “Stop struggling and behave, or this spanking will last much longer than it needs to.”

Sana kept fighting, panic rising, but Clara tugged the faded panties down to Sana’s knees with one hand. Then she picked up the wooden hair brush from the table. “I knew something like this would happen—that’s why I asked for this brush.”

The first blow landed hard on Sana’s bare bottom, the thick wooden back cracking like thunder. Sana yelped, shock freezing her for a second. Clara smiled coldly and started scolding. “That was a bad mistake, talking back and resisting like that. Especially in that rude tone. You think you can shout at us?”

She swung again, the brush smacking firmly, building heat instantly. Sana struggled more, but each hit came one after another—crack, crack, crack—turning her bottom red in patches. “This is what happens to disobedient girls,” Clara continued, her voice steady over Sana’s cries. “You insult us? You refuse? Learn your place.”

No one counted the strikes, but they kept coming, overlapping, making Sana’s bottom burn like fire. She begged, “Please stop! I’m sorry!” but Clara ignored her, hitting harder until Sana was crying like a little child, sobs shaking her body. A few rollers loosened and fell off from the constant thrashing, clattering to the floor. Only when Sana’s bottom was a deep, dark red—throbbing and sore—did Clara stop. She pushed Sana off her lap onto the floor. “Will you obey now, or do you want me to continue?” Her tone was calm but filled with anger.

Sana lay there crying, face and eyes puffy red from pain and tears, voice choking. “Y-yes… I’ll obey…”

Clara nudged Sana’s head lightly with her foot while still seated. “Say it properly. Will you obey now, or should I keep going?”

Sana gathered her strength through the sobs. “Yes, Miss Clara… this girl will obey…”

“Good.” Clara ordered sharply, “Kneel in front of me now. Back toward me. Sit straight.”

Sana scrambled up, knees shaking, and knelt as told, pulling her panties back up with trembling hands but leaving the skirt down for now. Her bottom stung fiercely with every movement. Clara began removing the remaining rollers roughly, yanking without care, making Sana wince each time. “Look at this behavior,” Clara said to Mrs. Whitmore, ignoring Sana. “Shouting like a brat. So insulting. As if she thinks she’s equal to us.”

Mrs. Whitmore nodded. “Pathetic. Keep going, dear.”

Once the hair was free—long, thick waves tumbling down—Clara tied the plain cloth around Sana’s neck like a cape, pulling it much tighter than needed, almost choking at first before loosening just enough. “This will catch the mess you’re making,” she muttered.

She grabbed the spray bottle and soaked Sana’s hair thoroughly, water dripping down her back. Then the comb came, pulled through with force, yanking out tangles without mercy. Sana bit her lip to stay quiet, tears still falling.

Clara positioned the scissors at mid-back level, the cold metal touching Sana’s skin through the cape. “This is the length we discussed, Grandma.”

Mrs. Whitmore nodded. “Yes. Proceed.”

Sana shook with fear, fresh sobs rising as Clara opened the scissors slowly. The first snip echoed in the quiet room—sharp, final—cutting through a thick section. Hair fell in wet clumps onto the cape, the sound like soft rain. Clara worked methodically, section by section, the blades gliding and closing with deliberate slowness, each cut shortening the once-knee-length hair to mid-back. Sana felt the weight lift bit by bit, her head lighter, but her heart heavier with sadness. Strands stuck to her wet neck, tickling as they dropped. Clara paused now and then to even it out, pulling hair taut before snipping, making sure it was straight. The pile on the cape grew, dark and heavy, a symbol of what Sana was losing. She cried quietly, body trembling, but didn’t dare move.

Once done with that layer, Clara set the scissors down briefly. “But because of her awful behavior, I’ll cut it shorter.” She lifted a section to shoulder level, pointing the blades there, and looked at Mrs. Whitmore.

Mrs. Whitmore smiled approvingly. “Excellent idea. Permission granted.”

Sana broke again, but softer this time, begging in a low voice. “No, please… not shorter… that’s too much…”

Clara slapped her across the face—sharp and stinging. “Have you already forgotten what happens when you don’t accept our decisions? Shut your mouth.”

Sana’s cheek burned, fresh tears spilling. Clara began again, this time with more force. She gathered sections at shoulder level, the scissors opening wide before closing with a satisfying crunch, severing inches at a time. Hair cascaded down in thicker bunches, the cape filling up. Clara cut layer by layer, starting at the back—snip after snip, the blades chewing through the damp strands, leaving blunt ends that brushed Sana’s shoulders. She moved to the sides, pulling hair forward to check length, trimming uneven bits with quick, precise cuts. “Look at this mess,” Clara scolded. “All this hair was just weighing you down, making you lazy. Shorter is better for a maid like you—less to fuss over, more time to work.” Insults flowed as she worked: “Dumb girl, thinking you could keep it long. It’s ugly anyway. Now you’ll look proper—plain and simple.”

Mrs. Whitmore added calmly, “Yes, much better. No more distractions.”

Sana sobbed through it all, feeling each cut like a loss, the scissors’ cold touch sending shivers. Clara evened the front last, framing it roughly around Sana’s face, snipping away until it sat just at her shoulders—straight, no style, just short and functional. The floor around them was scattered with fallen locks, a dark puddle of what used to be hers.

Satisfied, Clara set the scissors aside. “Now, to keep this short mess under control.” She sprayed the remaining hair again, soaking it fresh, then grabbed the smaller rollers. These were half the size—tight and compact. She sectioned the shorter hair quickly, twisting each piece even tighter than before, rolling it up high and pinning securely. The smaller size made them bunch closer together, pulling Sana’s scalp harder, creating a crown of tiny, stiff coils. “This suits you better,” Clara insulted as she wrapped. “Small and controlled, just like you should be. No more acting big.”

Once finished, Clara stood back. “Now clean this lounge. Every last hair. And hurry up.”

Mrs. Whitmore chimed in with more insults. “Lazy and ungrateful. We did you a favor, shortening that rat’s nest. Move faster, or you’ll stand all night.”

Sana, still crying softly, swept and wiped the floor until it shone, gathering the cut hair into a pile and throwing it away. Her new shorter length felt strange—lighter, but empty.

When done, Mrs. Whitmore ordered calmly, “Stand facing the wall. Hands behind your head. Tuck your skirt into the apron belt. Pull your panties down to your knees. Let that freshly spanked bottom get some air. For today, you’ll stand like this whenever you’re not serving directly.”

Sana obeyed, face to the wall, exposed and humiliated, bottom still throbbing red, as the day dragged on.

Sana quietly left Mrs. Whitmore’s room, her steps slow and heavy as she descended the stairs to the basement. The door clicked shut behind her, and the moment she was alone in the dim, windowless space, the tears she had been holding back burst free. She collapsed onto the thin mattress, burying her face in the rough pillow, sobbing her heart out. “Why is this happening to me?” she whispered to the empty walls, her voice breaking. “I didn’t do anything to deserve this. The spankings, the cutting, the insults—it’s too much. I just want to go home.” She complained to herself, replaying the day’s humiliations—the laughter from the ladies, the exposed position, the lecture that twisted everything to make her feel even smaller. Exhaustion finally overtook her, and she didn’t realize when she drifted off to sleep, still in her full maid uniform, the tight smaller rollers pulling at her scalp.

She woke with a start just before five, her body stiff and sore from the uncomfortable bed. Her shorter hair was messy under the rollers, some pins loose from tossing in her sleep, and her uniform was wrinkled. Her bottom still hurt a little, a dull ache from the spanking. Panic set in—she quickly sat up, fixed the rollers as best she could, twisting and pinning them back tightly, then smoothed her dress and apron. She wanted a bath badly, the sweat from the day making her feel sticky and unclean, but without permission, she couldn’t risk it. Disturbing Mrs. Whitmore early might lead to trouble, so she started her day as usual, making the bed perfectly and heading upstairs to clean and prepare breakfast.

After serving Mrs. Whitmore and standing silently through the meal, Sana gathered her courage. “Mrs. Whitmore, may this girl have permission to bathe?” she asked softly, eyes on the floor.

Mrs. Whitmore looked up calmly. “Allowed. But make time for it—the schedule can’t be delayed.”

Sana nodded quickly and somehow managed, squeezing a quick shower into her cleaning tasks, drying off fast and redressing before sweeping the floors.

Ten days had passed now, blending into a blur of endless chores and strict obedience. Sana had somehow managed without any serious punishments—just a few sharp slaps across the face for small mistakes, like a wrinkled cushion or a delayed announcement, and about twenty cane strikes in total across those days, each one stinging and humiliating but not as bad as before. The insults and humiliations piled up constantly—being called lazy, dumb, or ungrateful in front of guests, standing exposed when ordered, curtsying deeply every time she entered a room. She had learned to refer to herself as “this girl” or “the maid,” to keep her gaze down, and to endure the tight corset and rollers without complaint. The schedule ruled her life, leaving her exhausted but careful.

One evening, Sana stood quietly in the corner of the lounge, eyes lowered, hands folded neatly in front of her apron. It was her usual position now, one she had gotten used to, though the shame never fully faded. Clara and Mrs. Whitmore were chatting as part of their routine, their voices relaxed and familiar.

Clara leaned back on the sofa. “Grandma, what happened to the previous maid? She was much better than this clumsy one,” she said, gesturing dismissively toward Sana with an insulting sneer.

Mrs. Whitmore sipped her tea. “She’ll come back soon, don’t worry. And this girl is doing fine, actually.”

Sana’s heart skipped—for the first time in days, it felt like a tiny bit of praise, even if it wasn’t much. Someone had noticed her efforts.

Clara laughed sharply. “Doing fine? She’s not even half of what the previous maid was. That one was more obedient, more humble, and a lot more respectful than this sloppy thing.”

She started to say more about the previous maid, but Mrs. Whitmore cut her off with a light laugh. “Yes, but don’t hold a grudge against her for that disobedience almost two weeks ago. She’s not that important to waste our time thinking over it. Instead, give her a test again—see if she’s improved or not.”

Clara thought for a few seconds, then nodded. “Okay, Grandma. I will.” She turned to Sana. “Girl, bring my purse. We need to get groceries, and I also need to go to the salon.”

Sana’s stomach dropped. Going out? Dressed like this—in the maid uniform, hair in rollers, following a younger girl and obeying every command? Her heart pumped with fear. What if her friends or someone from school saw her? The public humiliations, the insults she’d have to take politely, thanking Clara respectfully—it could be endless degradation. She stood frozen, lost in a tornado of worried thoughts.

Clara’s voice snapped irritably, bringing her back. “Are you daydreaming again, you idiot? Fetch my purse now!”

Mrs. Whitmore added calmly, “And be on your best behavior. If I hear even a single complaint or mistake, it will be trouble for you.”

Sana’s face flushed. “This girl apologizes, ma’am.” She hurried to get Clara’s purse from the hallway table and handed it over.

Clara took it, hugged her grandmother, and said, “We’ll be back soon.” Then she walked out, with Sana following behind, maintaining a respectful distance. On the street, Sana kept her eyes lowered, scared of bumping into anyone she knew. The uniform felt like a spotlight, the rollers making her head look strange and exposed.

They walked out of the neighborhood to the nearby supermarket. Clara strode with confidence, head high, while Sana trailed behind. At the entrance, Clara ordered, “Take a trolley.”

Sana obeyed, pushing it along as Clara pointed to items—bread, milk, vegetables, cans—and Sana placed them in carefully. As they moved from aisle to aisle, Sana heard the whispers and comments from other customers. “Look at that girl in the maid outfit—what a joke,” one woman muttered to her friend. “Hair in rollers? She looks ridiculous, like she’s from another century.” A man chuckled nearby, “Must be some kind of punishment—poor thing, following that kid like a dog.” The words stung, making Sana’s cheeks burn, but she kept quiet, loading the trolley.

At the billing counter, Clara stood aside while Sana unloaded the items. The girl at the counter, about Sana’s age, smiled—but it was a cunning smirk, not friendly. She scanned the groceries and chatted with Clara, clearly seeing who was in charge. “So, is she your personal servant or something?” the girl asked with a grin. “Looks like she’s straight out of an old movie.”

Clara smiled sweetly, but her words cut. “Oh, she’s just the neighbor’s daughter under training. Needs to learn manners—still so clumsy and slow.”

The girl laughed. “Training, huh? Does she fetch and roll over too?” More giggles followed, aimed at embarrassing Sana further.

Sana’s face grew hotter, but she stayed silent, packing the bags as ordered.

Once billing was done, a teenage boy in the next line shouted mockingly, “Hey, is she available for hire? I could use a servant like that!”

Clara replied in her cold tone, “She’s still in training—not ready for real work yet.” The boy laughed awkwardly, and Sana felt even more uncomfortable, wishing the ground would swallow her.

Clara ordered, “Follow me,” and started walking out. Sana carried the heavy grocery bags in her arms—three big ones, weighing her down—and struggled to keep up on the street. Clara shouted back, “Keep up, or I’ll report to Grandma that you’re lazy!”

Sana walked faster, arms aching, bags digging into her skin. Suddenly, a car passed and stopped at a signal. The driver, a girl Sana’s age from school, locked eyes with her. Recognition flashed—the girl pulled out her phone to take a picture. Sana’s heart raced with shame and fear, but just then Clara hailed a taxi and ordered, “Get in.” The taxi drove off before the girl could snap the photo, leaving Sana trembling inside.

Soon, the taxi stopped at a salon. They got out, and Sana followed Clara in, feeling the judging eyes of the receptionist immediately. Clara walked to the desk, and the receptionist’s face lit up with genuine joy and respect. “Miss Clara! Right on time for your appointment. Go ahead.”

Clara nodded and ordered Sana, “Submit the bags here and follow.” She handed Sana her purse as she walked to the stylist chair.

The staff greeted Clara warmly—it was clear they knew her well, chatting like old friends. Clara sat down, handed her phone to Sana, and said, “Stand in the corner and wait.”

Sana obeyed, walking to the corner behind Clara and taking her usual position—hands folded, eyes lowered. Through the mirror, she was visible to everyone, her uniform and rollers drawing stares.

The stylist started working on Clara’s hair, chatting friendly. “Who’s the girl in the uniform?” she asked curiously.

Clara waved a hand. “Just someone under training at Grandma’s. Needs to learn her place.”

Sana stood silently, hearing jokes and comments from other customers and staff. “Look at those rollers—old-fashioned much?” one woman whispered loudly. “Maid outfit in public? Bet she’s being punished for something.” A staff member chuckled, “Quiet as a mouse, though. Cute in a sad way.”

Once Clara’s hair was set—styled neatly and shiny—she ordered Sana, “Hold the mirror at the back so I can see.”

Sana picked up the hand mirror and held it up, arms already tired from the bags. Clara made her hold it longer than needed, saying, “Higher. No, left. Now right. Better view.” Sana’s arms ached, but she obeyed, moving side to side as directed.

The stylist noticed and offered, “I can do that for you.”

Clara stopped her. “No, she’s under training. Needs to learn endurance.”

The stylist smiled and stepped back, letting Sana continue until Clara was satisfied. “Put it back.”

Clara stood from the chair, then turned to Sana with an ordering, cruel tone. “Now, it’s your turn.”

 

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